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Triple E Editing

Editorial services for middle grade and young adult fiction — with the rare perspective of an authentic teen reader.

Featured in the Los Angeles Times·Clients include NYT Bestselling authors·Edgar Award nominees·Debut novelists

What I Offer

Editorial Services

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Full Read & Line Notes

Detailed, page-by-page markup with inline comments on voice, pacing, authenticity, and craft — the kind of granular feedback that sharpens every scene.

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Global Feedback Letter

A comprehensive editorial letter addressing big-picture structure, character arc, theme, and market positioning within the MG and YA landscape.

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Authentic Teen Lens

A perspective no adult editor can replicate — honest, current insight into how today's teen readers think, speak, and experience the world on the page.

"Elili's perspective on my middle grade novel was invaluable. She provided insightful and professional editorial feedback — I can't wait to work with her again on my next project."

Alyson Gerber — Author of Taking Up Space, Focused, and Braced

Get in Touch

Ready to strengthen your manuscript?

Whether you're a debut novelist or a seasoned author, I'd love to hear about your project. Reach out and let's talk about your book.

About

Elili Flore

Elili Flore is a 16-year-old editorial consultant specializing in middle grade and young adult fiction. Her editorial eye was recognized by the Los Angeles Times when her work with middle grade novelists was featured in a 2022 profile — leading to an influx of author inquiries from across the publishing world.

Since then, Elili has provided manuscript feedback for a roster of clients that includes a New York Times Bestselling author, an Edgar Award nominee, and debut novelists making their first steps into publication. Her editorial services encompass a full read, detailed page-by-page markup, and a global feedback letter addressing structure, voice, character, and market fit.

What sets Elili apart is what no adult editor can offer: a genuine, unfiltered perspective from the exact audience these books are written for. Her feedback is honest, sophisticated, and grounded in a deep love of the genre.

Services at a Glance

What You'll Receive

Full Manuscript Read

A complete read-through with full attention to pacing, voice consistency, and reader experience.

Page-by-Page Markup

Detailed inline notes on language, dialogue, and authenticity throughout the manuscript.

Global Feedback Letter

A structured editorial letter addressing arc, theme, character development, and structural opportunities.

Kind Words

What Authors Say

"Elili's perspective on my middle grade novel was invaluable. She provided insightful and professional editorial feedback. I can't wait to work with her again on my next project."

Alyson Gerber Author of Taking Up Space, Focused, and Braced

"Hiring Elili to edit your book is a no-brainer. I engaged her as a young adult reader, but Elili's feedback is better than many adult editors. Her services go beyond reading for a young audience because Elili's comments demonstrate a startling maturity. She has a great ear for word choice, a real sense for how kids talk and feel, and a strong understanding of plot. She is not afraid to critique, but does so in a thoughtful way. It's obvious that my book will be much stronger because Elili read it."

Jaime Abrams